Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, June 29, 2009

Home Bound Comments

Rating: 4.9

Morning sleep and sweet dreams simply disturbed,
Bed side phone call buzz really perturbed,
Sweet dreams and cool breeze remained illusion,
since wife had left after scuffle with collision,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Pranab K Chakraborty 03 April 2010

Well poet. Live with happiness which resides simply in thoughts not in components. May someone / anyone come and go many times in life, but life itself is not always painful. I appreciate your catastrophe in this particular writing. Very pleasing and become ecstatic by the touch of her sweet return. Thank you, Write more.

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Aira Olayvar 10 January 2010

“Her smile was for home bound, All happiness and joy I found” That’s the way ladies should be… but the story is of bitter be… huhu…

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Lola Habas 22 November 2009

It was simple return and call, God saved me from further fall 10

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Eyan Desir 19 October 2009

Good write fine..........

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Sachin Goswami 18 October 2009

With all honest intent and plea surrendered, No let up in anger but why I wondered? She was so nice and never pondered, Why did she left and separation offered?

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Darshna Chopra 18 September 2009

Morning sleep and dreams simply disturbed, Bed side phone call buzz really perturbed

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Umesh Lalvani 16 September 2009

Morning sleep and dreams simply disturbed, Bed side phone call buzz really perturbed, Sweet dreams and cool remained illusion, Since wife had left after scuffle and collision,

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Ashley Paul 08 September 2009

Morning sleep and dreams simply disturbed, Bed side phone call buzz really perturbed, Sweet dreams and cool remained illusion, Since wife had left after scuffle and

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Saroj Davde 25 August 2009

vShe was so nice and never pondered, Why did she left and separation offered? ....10

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Reshma Punjabi 25 August 2009

With all honest intent and plea surrendered, No let up in anger but why I wondered? ....10

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Poonam Suthar 25 August 2009

husband is very happy at news....10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 16 August 2009

happy news for husband...10

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Shilpa Maheswari 16 August 2009

good news for him....10

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Indani Narayan 14 August 2009

happy news for husband....10

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Pami Panchal 13 August 2009

good news for husband...10

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Jigisha Vyas 09 August 2009

husband is relieved at news....10

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Sulochna Pandit 09 August 2009

only husbaand will feel good...10

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Sruthi Sahadevan 09 August 2009

well, turned out to be good for the husband huh? ?

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Saroj Davde 08 August 2009

husband is certainly happy person....10

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Radha Seth 08 August 2009

very happy nes for husband....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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