Monday, April 1, 2019

Home Anywhere Comments

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Here's him who anywhere feels at home,
Prison he feels were walls,
Freedom, if the wall falls,
He took off all across dome to roam
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2019

A wonderful limerick imbued with wisdom. Very entertaining and imparts knowledge. Yes, it is heart that makes a home. We can have a home anywhere as long as we have our.heart in it. Brilliantly and Superbly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Thanks for your generous comments, Rose marie

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 April 2019

bricks, walls, prison, house freedom, home of heart.............// all have amazing combination in this poem

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

But man heart does not seem to be in Earth. He wants to run away to another planet, not take constructive action. Thank you Mahtab Bangalee.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2019

Learned: bricks make house, not home, And saw all over dome That heart ‘tis that makes home, Hearth is made whilst from loam......right statement. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 April 2019

Thanks for the feedback, Kumarmani Mahakul.

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