Friday, October 4, 2013

Home Alone 4. Comments

Rating: 4.7

My parents are going to a party,
Of my father's friend Mr.Marty,
I'll don't like to go there,
Because there will be old people everywhere.
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Chinedu Dike 02 February 2020

A beautiful creation nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Ashir.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

Well wrote my son, keep writing.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

Well wrote my son, keep writing.

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Ambrin Aftab 01 January 2014

haaaahhahahhaha its the feelings off every child to hv fun in the absence of parents........

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