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You've succeeded...thrusting the reader in the frightening abyss...excited

very frightening indeed! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

'........no mother did hear.............ever! ! ! ! ! ! ' In a malicious torturous morning enfolding life and lifeless and Time: Still (standstill and at a halt) like a deadbody in icebox… Dear, you are taking us to another world..... Jaleel perinjanam

'........no mother did hear.............ever! ! ! ! ! ! ' In a malicious torturous morning enfolding life and lifeless and Time: Still (standstill and at a halt) like a deadbody in icebox… Dear, you are taking us to another world..... Jaleel perinjanam

A nice one, Seema, creating the feelings of fear!

very well composed piece....

splendid colours........ you have given a nice touch..........

quite frightening but you have made a lovely poem well executed...10