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Rating: 4.6

Home
is what widens between
the two heart- beats
whose decree is to leave
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Expiallidocious 29 December 2019

In each other's sunken life

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The beauty of home has splendidly been defined. Sunk as it is in dreams in other sunken life. Marvellous

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

What a beautiful concept! Home is what widens between the two hear-beats. A lovely poem

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Anjandev Roy 08 July 2019

Magnificent write. Very profound in sense. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.

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AFFAQ NABI 15 March 2019

Wonderfully written i like this poem....

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Shazaad Hosany 08 March 2019

Nice pen. Heart is the house of feelings and intentions. Home is a place where these are made clear so that we feel warm and secure.

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Tom Allport 18 August 2018

A poem of how a safe and secure home can be built? .....well penned Yoonoos

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2018

Home, nicely defined, it's made in the hearts of its inhabitants.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 June 2018

A great poem that captures the essence of a home. Well penned.10

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Palitha Ranatunge 09 July 2017

Dear Friend, I really like the concept in this poem. I humbly add this is not only about the home one lives, this is applicable to home town, home country etc. Thank you for sharing. Palitha Ranatunge.

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D M 08 July 2017

Home.......beautiful poetry

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 11 June 2017

simple yet profound indeed

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Keerthana Vk 08 June 2017

this poem is a meaningful one......ur thoughts are really of worth

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Mlondi Samkelo Ndlovu 31 May 2017

So true... I fan relate to every word

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 May 2017

Hi Yoonoos Bhai, Namaste... Lovely poem- on what makes a home! ! how a house gets transformed into home! ! Nice thinking...10+++

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Cigeng Zhang 31 May 2017

No matter rich or poor, the real home is a warm and peaceful nest that can ease us both physically and spiriturally.A good theme for home.A good theme of home.

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Sindiswa Ndamane 31 May 2017

mmm beautiful...and so true...home is a wonderful place to be

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Jeannette Heywood 31 May 2017

I like the sentiment of this poem.

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 31 May 2017

I like the poem and espesially the rhythum that is breathtaking. Thanks for introducing it.10

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Gordon Gilhuly 30 May 2017

... where windows spark the first sun... Lovely poem - I especially like that line. I'll certainly be reading more of your work. Thanks.

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