Home
is what widens between
the two heart- beats
whose decree is to leave
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The beauty of home has splendidly been defined. Sunk as it is in dreams in other sunken life. Marvellous
What a beautiful concept! Home is what widens between the two hear-beats. A lovely poem
Magnificent write. Very profound in sense. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.
Nice pen. Heart is the house of feelings and intentions. Home is a place where these are made clear so that we feel warm and secure.
A poem of how a safe and secure home can be built? .....well penned Yoonoos
Home, nicely defined, it's made in the hearts of its inhabitants.
A great poem that captures the essence of a home. Well penned.10
Dear Friend, I really like the concept in this poem. I humbly add this is not only about the home one lives, this is applicable to home town, home country etc. Thank you for sharing. Palitha Ranatunge.
this poem is a meaningful one......ur thoughts are really of worth
Hi Yoonoos Bhai, Namaste... Lovely poem- on what makes a home! ! how a house gets transformed into home! ! Nice thinking...10+++
No matter rich or poor, the real home is a warm and peaceful nest that can ease us both physically and spiriturally.A good theme for home.A good theme of home.
mmm beautiful...and so true...home is a wonderful place to be
I like the poem and espesially the rhythum that is breathtaking. Thanks for introducing it.10
... where windows spark the first sun... Lovely poem - I especially like that line. I'll certainly be reading more of your work. Thanks.
In each other's sunken life