nice, I like it. especially the pause part, I could feel my legs doing that. for me I would have put something like 'i take them one,4 of two, pause, one,4 of two' cuz' that's how I run up.
-landrey
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nice, I like it. especially the pause part, I could feel my legs doing that. for me I would have put something like 'i take them one,4 of two, pause, one,4 of two' cuz' that's how I run up. -landrey