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Through two doors.
Rows of books.
Swinging door.
Eleven to pause.
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Sophia White
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Landrey 22 February 2007

nice, I like it. especially the pause part, I could feel my legs doing that. for me I would have put something like 'i take them one,4 of two, pause, one,4 of two' cuz' that's how I run up. -landrey

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R. S. Farris 16 February 2007

YES....sincere emphathy.

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