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Far away, dark clouds gather,
Despondency fills my heart.
Far away, the red sun drowns in the ocean,
A deep sadness prevails.
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Anita Sehgal
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Prasanna Kumari 09 November 2012

the repetition of 'far away ' with a beautiful description of nature carrying and transferring heavy human feelings in words brings out intense emotions to the mind..

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There is no place quite like home. Well done my friend!

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Babatunde Aremu 31 October 2012

Good poem. Home is the final destination, a place of peace. This is similar to my poem: Home Is The Best. Keep scribling

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Kelvin Owusu 07 October 2012

you truly have a way with words, nothing new again a great read

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Kelvin Owusu 07 October 2012

you truly have a way with words, nothing new again a great read

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Walterrean Salley 05 October 2012

With strong contrast, you've created a wonderful analogy of home. A place like none other. Enjoyed.

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Lyn Paul 02 October 2012

This is beautiful Anita, very powerful. Well done. The sun will come

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Lyn Paul 02 October 2012

This is beautiful Anita, very powerful. Well done. The sun will come

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Hans Vr 02 October 2012

There is no place like home in the world. Excllent write

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Neela Nath Das 01 October 2012

A wonderful write! Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 27 September 2012

When all around is dark, withdraw into a secret haven where peace and love abide. A beautiful write! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2012

Touch the source ….. which engulfs in love and a deep peace prevails.....lovely poem to be read...10 adore the love and believe that once you had relived that is real asset allow it tome in open and let

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Valerie Dohren 09 September 2012

Lovely write, that peace we are all seeking.

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Meera Panigrahi 08 September 2012

Unlock the heart which is our real home.

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