Far away, dark clouds gather,
Despondency fills my heart.
Far away, the red sun drowns in the ocean,
A deep sadness prevails.
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There is no place quite like home. Well done my friend!
Good poem. Home is the final destination, a place of peace. This is similar to my poem: Home Is The Best. Keep scribling
you truly have a way with words, nothing new again a great read
you truly have a way with words, nothing new again a great read
With strong contrast, you've created a wonderful analogy of home. A place like none other. Enjoyed.
This is beautiful Anita, very powerful. Well done. The sun will come
This is beautiful Anita, very powerful. Well done. The sun will come
When all around is dark, withdraw into a secret haven where peace and love abide. A beautiful write! !
Touch the source ….. which engulfs in love and a deep peace prevails.....lovely poem to be read...10 adore the love and believe that once you had relived that is real asset allow it tome in open and let
the repetition of 'far away ' with a beautiful description of nature carrying and transferring heavy human feelings in words brings out intense emotions to the mind..