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Rating: 5.0

It always rains in my hometown,
The clouds are kind enough to wash what they can away

The town cut out my tongue,
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H.J. Shreeve
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Elin Grimes 10 July 2012

I like this a lot - especially the last four lines. Very well written.

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Michael Morgan 21 June 2012

Not a boring poem. Good voice with good balance between the speaker and the setting. MM

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H.J. Shreeve

H.J. Shreeve

Hobart, Tasmania
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