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i am with Odion in explaining the last phrase..and this is nice a poem i must say...

There is no place like home - true

IT DESERVES THE COMMENT DIRECT STRAIGHT U TAUGHT ME SOMETHING GLAD I AM HERE WILL SEEK TO BE HERE MORE OFTEN ITS A POETS PARADISE OF LEARNING BLESS

Very very well written poem. Also, Well thought of poem. Nice job.

Very creative acrostic poem this is! The last line 'before it rains' caught my mind hard...great phrase! well lets see, what do i think about this..i think that part signifies despair....rain symbolizes life, but on the other hand, it also depicts grief (as tears) in some cases. But in this poem, i think 'before it rains' means 'before you die'....it makes sense! ! explore your fate before you [get old and] die.....: D that's what I like about your poetry, your messages are so clear and clean no matter how twisted the expressions are...very nicely done! it's got a subtle humor too! 10/10.

the last line 'before it rains' caught my mind...i also have a poem with this 'lyrics'..hehe well, what do i think about this....i think that part signifies despair....rain symbolizes life (for the crops) , but on the other hand, it also depicts grief (as tears) .... in this poem, i think 'before it rains' means 'before you die'....hehe...it makes sense though...explore your fate before you [get old and] die....haha

Fantastic work! Keep it up :)

i really enjoyed this poem, it is well written. keep up the good work.

i really love the way said at the end 'before it rains' everyday i trie to skip the pain but its hard

to behonest this is the best poem of them all.. well written <3

...Before it rains. Well written, unfortunately not all of us can skip the pain. pain is like a scar, you always have a reminder. and although it seems to have healed you will always carry the mark of the wounded, to remind you through the day of the loss you have felt. Home is a place you share with someone and it shields you from that pain. But when that someone is there no more, your home turns into a coffin. nice write tho.

very well written. Keep up the good work. Your readers are eagerly waiting for more. Inform me when you have more for me to read. :)

This is really good and beautiful! You were right i love it

Home is where the heart is.Very useful content here.Cheers.

explore the pain before it rains... hmm i have to say this line is bouncing up and down in my thoughts

This is pretty good. I like it!

wow its short n straight to the point and it's very good, you don't show that much emotion but you do make us to get the message.big ups

very well written.. you know how to express you self..

A great, optimistic poem that is clear-cut and to the point...indeed, a loving home is something that all children need, those with and without parents, to be able to truly flourish and grow. A combination of taking action by oneself and trusting in higher forces can certainly help in finding a home for the heart. Wonderful write, thanks for sharing. :) ~Leslie~

Home is where the heart rest! Very nice poem...and a v positive spiritual message. Well done, keep writing.