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You remind me of winter nights
Cold snow crunching under foot.
My breath fogging in the air.
The cold crisp smell of pine.
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Aine Carroll
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John Oconnell 24 May 2010

THIS IS A LOVELY, COSY POEM ABOUT HOME. EVERY WORD DOES ITS WORK AND THE RHYTHM IS PERFECT. THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT AND GIVE MY REGARDS TO MULLINGAR IF YOU EVER GET THAT FAR.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 May 2010

ingeniously written all through lovely passion,10++, thanks for sharing

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Matt Mooney 16 May 2010

The stuff that poetry is made of and you made it effortlessly.

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Aine Carroll

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