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Home is a place where you get the feeling of belonging
Home is a place where you can feel safe
Home is a place where you first did many things as a child.
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Marcellus Watts
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Home is a place where you get the feeling of belonging Home is a place where you can feel safe Home is a place where you first did many things as a child...... beautiful description of what is called home...... nice idea and deserves....10 read mine 'A place called home''school'& 'hen laid aneggs''''' all kid series

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Jerine James 17 June 2009

Hi WATTS This poem- Home has touched me.. the way you have described the feelin of being at home. place where things were taught and learnt, practiced and acheived, its the root of one's life. awesome.. i loved it..keep writing.. HOME SWEET HOME

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i love this poem its awesome... keep writing could you plz read and comment on my new poem, its called 'do you feel better now? ' thank you

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