Sunday, February 1, 2009

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They say there's no place like home, I believe that
But my home is not where last night I sat
My home is not where I keep my things
My home is not where my doorbell rings
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Kirsty Richards
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Greenwolfe 1962 01 February 2009

I love the rhymes and the rhythm that comes with the good ones. This is a pleasure to read. I wish all writing was this easy to read. This was concise as well. That is very important. The ending was outstanding. That was the key. Wonderful! GW62

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