Friday, September 25, 2020

Homage To The Romantics Comments

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life graphs of ups and downs a chains of reason to capture man
to lose his very innocence
made mental madnesswith a circle of woven ice,
to freeze the fevered brain.
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Paul Brookes
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Terry Craddock 26 September 2020

Solar Wind Oceans Light Years Crossing time liquid drip drip drops in pearl tears as rock weeps time fluid elastic expands into moments minutes months years eternities breathing time fluid trickle stream river flows into void dark space seas solar wind oceans light years hand span universe crossings Inspired by the poem 'Homage To The Romantics' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 26 September 2020

Time Galactic Universe Crossings time liquid drip drip drops in pearl tears as rock weeps time elastic expands into moments minutes months years eternities breathing time fluid trickle stream river flows into seas oceans light years galactic universe crossings Inspired by the poem 'Homage To The Romantics' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 26 September 2020

Into Universe Fabric Expanding Space a place time timeless to sit listen in silken darkness to infinite velvet ages a point stretching in mind light piercing across vast space cosmos soul free may flight aspire through rock atom election spaces into space to watch star birth into universe fabric expanding space to silent light elements squeezed watch pressure nuclei undergo fusion star birth Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Terry Craddock 26 September 2020

Soul Free May Flight Aspire Through Rock a place time timeless to sit listen in silken darkness to infinite ages a point stretching in mind light piercing across vast space cosmos soul free may flight aspire through rock atom spaces into space to watch star birth Inspired by the poem 'Homage To The Romantics' by the poet Paul Brookes. Dedicated to the poet Paul Brookes.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 September 2020

a truer self from dreams may come, of total blackness or pure light or struggle with ones better self in torpid bitter dreams. a drop of silver water, silent falls, into a sunless cave, where incongruous images sit in deep dead places we dare not seek or dwell. this is really a great poem. thank you dear poet. tony

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Terry Craddock 25 September 2020

'elastic spaces... careful not to fall' time liquid drip drip drops in pearl tears as rock weeps, time elastic expands into moments minutes months years eternities breathing, time fluid trickle stream river flows into seas oceans light years universe crossings

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Terry Craddock 25 September 2020

'a drop of silver water, silent falls, into a sunless cave, where incongruous images sit in deep dead places' a place time timeless to sit listen in silken darkness to infinite ages, a point stretching in mind light piercing across vast space cosmos, soul free may flight aspire through rock atom spaces into space to watch star birth

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