Step aside,
Kings and princes-
Hamlet, Lear and Othello,
Fictional tragic heroes,
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marvellous marvellous composition...love the way you open the piece it gives the reader a great appetite for what is to come.the tragedy and the emotions of the protagonist are so acutely delineated that you can taste his shock then his guilt and finally his helpless acceptence.marvellous.
an excellent write. sorry to read about the sorrowful and dreadful incident.i hope people realize the consequences of this.
A tragedy what it was, but the grieving and sorrows will last till you smile like never before.My heartfelt sorry for those victims! May God bless their souls.
pain...this is the only sublime reality in the universe my eyes are so dry that tears are also scarce..
a bolt from the glamor and name to the stark realities sensitive in tone and hits the mental tracks
saddenning though, strong poetic words, Mamta...converted by money drug and misguided ideology into cruelty and greed, men killing innocents...where is the end for this? 10+
except to pay a silent homage a living common man can not undo a wee bit...as for the poetry in it...well i said it in my 'lifeinpoetry.' the vulnerability of life...more so that of common folks like us...
I'm hungry for this kind of poetry....this one is very satisfying for my burning heart....Mamta ji, please write more of this kind.
Mam', you write the poem overcast with the sorrow of the bereaved and not just him, but all who have suffered loss of loved hearts. You think of the pain they endured and your tortured soul poured forth this song a soothing soulful empathy bringing out the glory of the soul which triumps undaunted and walks even sometimes alone till the end of worldly journey. Please read my 'Bereaved' inspired by you, again. Angel