Monday, November 10, 2014

Holy Tears Comments

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In your company my heart becomes sage
My eyes become clean to capture your image
Please accommodate me don't be in rage
Let us be one on our love page
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Galina Italyanskaya 18 November 2014

Whatever the circumstances could be I do believe you can save me Sweet and optimistic!) Love is unconditional and it's that force which can save us and make us better indeed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2014

My tears define and refine my soul...really wonderful imagery. Each line touches heart with deep emotion. Excellent poem shared.

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Alesia Leach 15 November 2014

Impressive poem, great job.

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Muhammad Ali 15 November 2014

beautiful poem with nice flow. the best thing is the title.... HOLY TEARS. BEST WISHES

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Sallam Yassin 11 November 2014

this love is holy love and tears is holy i see thanks brother to share

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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