~ Holy Milk ~ Comments

Womanhood, motherhood, virginity, holy breasts and holy milk. Very good poem and thought provoking.. tony

A poem full of symbols, though too much abstraction is there still poem is good.

Virgin breast is a symbol of chastity endowed with adorable women reflecting unimaginable flow of fathomless purity.ie her holy milk.great poem. Great poet, please feel to read any one of my poem and comment like 'children of iraq'.

A thought provoking read. Symbollic of the purity of womanhood and motherhood. Deep content, well expressed.; D

wow virgin breast! Holy milk when I'know the taste this milk? I'never drink holy milk.just i'know a ''manna''bread from heaven, great poem of you: thumb: : thumb:

oh goodie... yup... it is a thoughtful and thought-provoking piece... written by a true poet

nice one Nivedita! ! Liked it much! ! give a 10 +

Glorious expression of Motherhood....Cyclic weeping//Love flowering//Fracturing trust...still //forgiveness...Your style and use of words is unparalleled, no wonder you get so many poets to eager to savor its fragrance and comment. Thanks.

Thoughtful, and thought-provoking piece.Thank you for sharing...Mari

Quite mysterious I would say.

Love flowething Thro’ virgin breast sometimes it is diffcult to understand yourpoems. but i love ur expressions. some times i feel a lot of contadictions too. would u please explain yur poem in a message. i would be grateful.

O’ breast feel jamboree Nip inertia embarrassment... prolific writing..really an impressive one...virgin feelings with profound expression Thanks for sharing

Niv: You have expressed, in a most impressive poem, the love of motherhood. We can only echo your voice in sounding like a glorious bugle as we express the importance of motherhood. Thanks for a good write. Lynn

Redefined Motherhood! ‘…O’ breast feel jamboree/Nip inertia embarrassment. ‘ Again glorification of Motherhoodness! I thank you Ma’am for such a beautiful poem… 10++

Beguiling beaut enchanting Mother Son relations defined and as additive Father came into purview and preview… 10+++ Dr. V

Your write contains power of rhythm and idea, a beautiful poem indeed, thanks for sharing!

The first stanza was the richest for me, a cave in Israel witnessed a virgin birth, strange that the angels of heaven should celebrate a birth in a cave, which I like so many others was compelled to visit. As I visited also the two caves in Nazareth, the homes of Joseph and Mary, before the birth in Bethlehem and escape into Egypt and upon their return years later. So much history centered upon a single religious site, as other religions centre their beliefs upon similar locations of importance to them.

dear niv, you really have some ideas.this poem is remarkable.the first para is astoundind 'Cyclic weeping Overdue Love flowething Thro’ virgin breast O’ Holy Milk Who made it happen Fracturing fragrance of trust? ' thanx for sharing. voted10 surya

From gentled breast Deliver deathless lovehope Share him hear Vouched euphonic motherhood Spilling relentlessly! Ooohing! .......holitic approachwith pure mind and what an inspiration in words. only niv can do it i m sure.. supern flow of words....10 read mine.........a wise to be... love is to be found

'Love flowething Thro’ virgin breast O’ Holy Milk' ..Oh! so pure thought...... purest form.... one (actually only NIV) can think of.. I loved it... I'll read it again.. Thank you.. 10+++