Holy Message Comments

Hasmukh, why should I, an agnostic, read such a poem? It's just religious propaganda. Good poetry doesn't preach. Furthermore, if you're truly interested in writing good English verse, you'd better commit yourself to mastering the language. This poem is almost incomprehensible because of your ESL(?) issues. You need to immerse yourself in good contemporary English verse, poets like Mary Oliver and Billy Collins. That is, if you want to improve as a poet. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC

Paying Him to bless for more occasion to serve poor And help to be on good terms with neighbor