Sunday, January 31, 2016

Holly Valley Comments

Rating: 5.0

O see, the sunny light climbs the leaves
The leaves climb the wisterias
The wisterias climb the feathery hat
The feather hat climbs the wings of delight
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

Love! With the wings of delight. Thanks for sharing.

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Paul Beech 10 March 2016

Such a delightful poem, Cigeng. I love it and know my youngest granddaughter will too when I read it to her tomorrow. Funnily enough, she’s called Holly and I’ve often walked her in the charming Weaver Valley near her home in Cheshire! My very best to you from a little town in North Wales, Paul

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Ernest Makuakua 06 February 2016

beautiful so beautiful and amazing thanks for the work shared keep writing

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Daniel Brick 05 February 2016

This is a remarkable poem, Cigeng Nature and humanity are comppletely enveloped in each other. They are twined together byn the spesker's words butmalso by ther creative imagination. This cannot paraphrased in prose. It exist only as poetry. The machine is not beautful but inside is a soul that appreciates beauty. According to the Geek Squad my computer is dying but it had to express the beauty of this poem.

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Cigeng Zhang

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