Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Holly Diver Comments

Rating: 4.5

Wings of black and gold
Eyes dark staring cold
Teeth of the thorned crown
Your scales nailed him down
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Sarah Sisson 07 December 2008

I like this one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Viola Grey 09 November 2008

'Teeth of the thorned crown'.... an excellent line that one...mixes the idea of stealing the crown right off the crucifix

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Chocolate Bunny 27 September 2008

I like this one, it's good.

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Tyease Collins 25 September 2008

Nice! A darker poem. I love the demon dogs. Excellent excellent excellent! 20/10 lol -Tess <3

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Emancipation Planz 23 September 2008

Sometimes I get really worried about boys tinking imagination... tonight has been one of them.... xx

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