Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Hollow Palm Leaves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like palm leaves
Without the breeze
The stillness of the heart
Without its beats
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Ibrahim Sambo
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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

Absence is like 'the melancholy of the dawn without dew', a nice imagery.10 for it.

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Theresa Moore 09 February 2008

You have created the emotion of loneliness. I sense there is a love that can not be erased by time or separation. Nicely done.

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