Saturday, November 29, 2025

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Building without foundation
courts ruination
action without rumination
saps elation
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M.J. Lemon
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Kim Barney 21 December 2025

Loved the line: Anything life throws at me I can face.

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Smoky Hoss 21 December 2025

Excellent poetry. Love wins out.

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Savita Tyagi 14 December 2025

Lovely poem. All the pounding and punching that life gives, amazing is human power to still love it, adjust to it and move with it. ito it

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M.J. Lemon 16 December 2025

Thank you so much, Savita. And I agree about our remarkable ability to roll with whatever strikes.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 December 2025

2) cont'd: M.J., I love every thing about this poem, especially the line: 'thinking winds blow'. Couldn't help but think about Dylan when reading that masterful phrase. Par excellence!

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M.J. Lemon 16 December 2025

Thank you so much for these comments, Richard. I was thinking about the 60s when I started this poem, Your ability to pick up on the subtle things is just amazing, my friend!

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Richard Wlodarski 10 December 2025

Had Bob Dylan not left his home town, would he have become so famous? Ditto for so many artistes! Food for thought, my friend!

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Anjandev Roy 06 December 2025

Brilliant and significant piece.... thanks for sharing...

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M.J. Lemon 16 December 2025

Many thanks, Anjandev. The fact this poem resonated means a great deal.

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Laquory Jones 30 November 2025

That is a great poem M.J. Lemon. Keep up the great work

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M.J. Lemon 05 December 2025

Thank you so very much. Much appreciated.

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