Building without foundation
courts ruination
action without rumination
saps elation
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Lovely poem. All the pounding and punching that life gives, amazing is human power to still love it, adjust to it and move with it. ito it
Thank you so much, Savita. And I agree about our remarkable ability to roll with whatever strikes.
2) cont'd: M.J., I love every thing about this poem, especially the line: 'thinking winds blow'. Couldn't help but think about Dylan when reading that masterful phrase. Par excellence!
Thank you so much for these comments, Richard. I was thinking about the 60s when I started this poem, Your ability to pick up on the subtle things is just amazing, my friend!
Had Bob Dylan not left his home town, would he have become so famous? Ditto for so many artistes! Food for thought, my friend!
Many thanks, Anjandev. The fact this poem resonated means a great deal.
Loved the line: Anything life throws at me I can face.