Building without foundation
courts ruination
action without rumination
saps elation
a wall and window
stand erect hollow
but what do i know
thinking winds blow
doors and floors
hit me to the core
I'll never leave this place
Anything life throws at
me I can face
believing
thinking
clinging
to you and you
Excellent write! ! ! When all fails, true love shall not.
Rather "hollow" … but not really as there is something deep which we would " hallow." In my other comment I misspelled the title. But maybe because the poem is not hollow at all!
For a poem titled "hallow" there seems to be much in the heart of of this poem!
A very inspiring and meaningful poem. Life's hardships can be conquered with because of the 'you' in our life. Wonderful poem, M.J.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Brilliant and significant piece.... thanks for sharing...
Many thanks, Anjandev. The fact this poem resonated means a great deal.
Thank you so much. THanks for reading, Anjandev.