Thursday, September 20, 2007

Hollow Comments

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The Hollow feeling inside
The smiles I seem to hide
The pressure on my chest
My infinite Loss of Rest
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Barbara Parker
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Bill Thomas 31 October 2008

Be you, Barbara, be you: yes, those inside a System will urge conformity on you, but usually the System will've been founded by people not conforming to a previous System... never let yourself be confined by others' boxes & labels, but be YOU - it's hard, & you'll get a lot of flak for it, but if you can hold on, the world'll be a much better place for having a nonconformist like you in. Take courage!

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Zia Jaycee May Trent 21 September 2007

I really love your poem; I feel like that too sometimes. Check out my poem, People Change, it's really similar to yours. keep writing...

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