Tuesday, January 7, 2014

Holidays- (An Acrostic Poem) Comments

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H alting from all weary work
O n a trip we went to avert nervous wreck
L ively days with many a jocund friend
I n a jovial mood with no deadlines to tend
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Valsa George
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 November 2014

Very creative indeed this acrostic is......Valsa......amazing creation.....but it seems to me a great poem

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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2014

Thanks for the deepawli greetings. Liked this acrostic poem.

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Tajudeen Shah 15 January 2014

hm.. something beyond pure acrostic though. merry is made, happiness is felt, moods are set, love is made, felt and set. God bless.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 January 2014

Beautiful acrostic almost reflecting my mood. My holidays are almost over and will have to be back to work. Thank you for this creation.

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Kavya . 09 January 2014

holidays, we always long for, yes they are indeed ful of pleasure and a break from the monotonous routine work we are into.......a great Acrostic write as usual

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Dinesan Madathil 08 January 2014

An Acrostic Poem of this kind makes you feel light in thoughts and as you enjoy a break of holidays, we begin to see a caravan of joys immense chasing you and long to be a part of it. Short and beautiful a poem, Madam.

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Rubab Atwal 08 January 2014

a wonderful poem..true its a perfect acrostic

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 08 January 2014

A perfect acrostic, kudos Valsa.

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