Thursday, September 12, 2013

Holidays Comments

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Green fields filled with canvas hills,
Triangles, rectangles, domes and tunnels,
Stretched as far as the eye can see,
All the colours of the rainbow,
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Barry N Williams
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Ramesh Rai 06 October 2013

A fantastic write. enjoyed your write.

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Harshit Sheth 01 October 2013

you are Fantastico! ! ! ! Please Like my Poems also! ! :)

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Rajeev Deshpande 27 September 2013

A vivid description of holiday. Geometry in first two lines adds to beauty of poem. I liked it.

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