Thursday, July 4, 2019

Holiday Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Holiday time to some people,
Means a good long rest.
For others it means a chance,
To do what they like best.
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Shaun Cronick
COMMENTS
A B Faniki 31 August 2019

Beautiful simply lovely and beautiful. Donnot let up on the rhyme it was nice. Thanks for sharing

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Shaun Cronick 03 April 2020

Thank you A B for your kind and most gracious comment. Take care and enjoy life and the good virtue's it has to offer.

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Julia Luber 01 August 2019

Charming celebration of vacation! Good to be in a poem! Usually I read a book on vacation too and have a different experience of literature than amidst the hubbub of regular daily life.

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Shaun Cronick 29 August 2019

Thank you Julia for your kind comment. We all need a holiday or vacation as you say. So treat your self to a break it's on me and the torpedoes. Take care Julia.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 July 2019

Wow, what a wonderful poem that most of us, if not all, can relate. This poem resonates with me especially the third stanza but food is in moderation. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.

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Shaun Cronick 11 July 2019

Thank you Rose Marie Juan-Austin for you kind and generous comment. Your poems Rose Marie, your magnificent poems are timeless. Any comment from a world-class poet such your good self is cherished and true Blessing. Thank you so much.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 July 2019

" Your holiday time is yours alone, So make the most of every day" . A marvelous life song elaborating human nature and it's inclinations for enjoyment of holidays. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Shaun Cronick 11 July 2019

Thank you once again for your kind, generous Ratnakar. Take care my friend. And I thank you once again.

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