Thursday, April 7, 2016

Holes Comments

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You are the hole that is filled
with the optimism of forgiveness.
I am the shovel that fills the hole
with my rushing trials of pessimism.
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Chris G. Vaillancourt
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Paul Sebastian 11 April 2016

Great write, Chris. We are all empty holes with lot of holes to fill. Filling our emptiness is lifetime. Completed when we are perfect when we are with our Maker. Your poem is soul searching. Thank you.

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