Sunday, September 24, 2006

Hole In Me Comments

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If you left me
I'd be empty
You'd leave a hole in me
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Lu Vernezze
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Fil LeBoeuf 24 September 2006

Wow! That repetition works so well! Even the 'over' and 'over' again I think works well. Nice. ~Fil

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