i had a dream
the dream was beautiful
so i shared it with you
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an arresting title indeed and a good poem developed on it...! ! !
A heart in love is a fragile heart left with a hole by a the one made of stone, a unique idea. You've nicely presented pun on words!
excellent....the caption of the poemt itself is very catchy! ! ! !
There is none who can heal the hurt heart! You have to mend it.Great!
How sad Kanava! ! Like a citadel with bullet holes, your heart is left with a hole. Who did that offense to you, after so willingly sharing everything of yours with her? She should be penalised.....! !