Thursday, January 16, 2014

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strange the lies we tell
just to keep afloat
we build a raft
to float over hard times
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Nika McGuin
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Bri Edwards 10 February 2014

The Downside And The Upside Of Using Lies Lies can seem at times necessary, but.... in the long run can make life more hairy. BUT, ... if at times no lies are spoken, you may end up with your life broken. BUT, again, .... use lies sparingly to be sure....so.... you don't depend on them for each cure. thanks for sharing poem and poet's note. bri :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 16 January 2014

Lies are the way of life now a days..............it keeps you alive in short term but drowns you in the long term........... nice reading.............nika.........short and to the point.................

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