Hole Comments

This is a poem with an eye catching title. 'There's a hole in me when you're not around. It aches and it throbs, ' - A perfect description of the hole! 'And it is often that you disappoint me, with what you don't say and what you don't do.' - Well said! 'It knows better than to seal itself shut.' and... 'it's unfair to assume that with one kiss you'd have it repaired.' - Wow! So beautifully said! 'this hole inside me gets bigger each day and it's a serious, life-threatening condition.' -Perfect picture!