Monday, December 7, 2009

Holding On To You Comments

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This been best time I have with you
No matter what I didn’t want to come off
The roller coaster and stay with you
Why do I love you so much?
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Christina Phan
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Abdullah Musa 15 December 2009

Crush is more than pain, it ensalve our rationality and worst the fear of rejection. Simple and sensible.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 11 December 2009

Teen-age love experience and emotions are very well expressed in this poem. The repetition of word 'crush' emphasizes on generosity and spontaneity of the love. Best Wishes. Naseer

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Eyan Desir 07 December 2009

Nice write. Well expressed........

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Christina Phan

Christina Phan

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