Friday, November 23, 2012

Holding On Comments

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Holding it inside is the worst thing.
Slowly tears roll down the face,
And the heart starts to hurt.
Can't take no more,
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Mariah Simpson
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Kelly Seale 24 November 2012

no need to say more... take comfort in my arms, a friend holding you, wiping away the tears, and telling you it will all be ok...for you're not alone. Holding On is a very emotional read. I felt what you felt, true empathy is a special gift and through your words Mariah, you brought me to the threshold of your heart. Loved this piece, (brought me to tears, and as a writer, this is the highest complement.) -Kelly.

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Loveland, Colorado
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