Monday, December 22, 2008

Holding My Own Hand. Comments

Rating: 2.7

Im holding my own hand.
Pretending its someone else.
Wishing it was yours.
Dreaming of how it would feel.
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lilly mandrell
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Aiden Florence 22 December 2008

Simple, short, yet still good. Nice ideas and transitions of ideas between the stanzas.

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