Thursday, September 20, 2007

Holding My Hand Comments

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Sitting on the pier looking out across the sand,
Arm around me and holding my hand.
I'll love you forever, I love you so.
I'll clutch on forever and never let go.
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Daniel Adams
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Mark Rivera 24 October 2008

You're gift is abundant and leaves me awestruck. Words so deep- a passion so true, I can completely feel all that you were saying- I've met a few 'amazing' writers- I know a lot of writers but your poetry for some reason has me wanting to read more- and I never even heard of this site before my teacher sent me your link. Loved this poem, -Mark

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Linda Weischedel 09 November 2007

Very, very precious Daniel. Always, Linda

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Polar Bear 20 September 2007

I think it's very sweet :) .......

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