Friday, December 11, 2015

Holding Back Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do you hold back the tears
Are you afraid they won't stop
Will those flood gates open
Of all in life you have lost
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Lyn Paul
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Jennifer Birchall 22 May 2019

Very inspiring poem to keep going and not give up. Wonderful poem dear Lyn.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

We keep Rolling! Because, there is a way. Nice work.

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Jak Black 03 January 2016

I like this poem, Lyn. The message here is that you need to hide your pain for fear of upsetting the ones you love, and believe in your ability to carry on, if only for the sake of your family.

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Unwritten Soul 23 December 2015

When i read poem by you i always find a certain way that really shown me poetric signature in your work...and like other works, this one is also soooo nice and so goood to read :)

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Nigel Norton 14 December 2015

Well, there's a lot there for me to think about....once the tears are out though you can stand up, brush yourself down and start again......enjoyed it Lyn.

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Tony Karas 11 December 2015

tears and hugs for you my friend. I well know about holding back the tears. Hiding the pain. Smiling although inside you are dying. Healing others when you cannot heal yourself. I wish I could bring a smile to your face and laughter to your heart. My prayers for you every single day.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2015

Having pain, tear and suffering also many of us smile whole day after having trust on self. Forever climbing a mountain they hold back the make up of successful hopes. Very nice and finely drafted sharing. Wisely penned.10

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