Holden Cauldfield Comments

Some are innocent for not more than a decade, how cruel, how tough, how bad,

wow i really like this poem you really captured the whole idea of the young breaking out and becoming adults even if it means freeing ourselves from something tahts great.

Roberta, beautiful work! This poem holds the passion that a lot of us lost after we were defeated by the system. My advice to you is the same advice that was given to me a long time ago: 'Success lies in doing not what others consider to be great but what you consider to be right'. (John Gray)