#hold Comments

Great thought. the narration is so well written. deserves 10+++++++++

The foot note of yours does bring out your longing for a true brotherhood. You tell us also to 'Hold' - Stop! Stop what we are doing falling in a rut and asking us to join and make a new weave! A Calling which should be heeded by all! As always your thoughts are so beautiful reminding us of inner salvation above all. Let me Hold my Soul! Angel

A beautiful poem with spiritual essence also. It is in favor of mankind.

i understand the permeation process thro' this poem...great

ya at cross roads we can do so many things is proper perspectives

Aha, Thy name is already half a poem....! It resonates like the syllables within it. No wonder you are a poet!

The concluding line of your poem tells it all - that we have to stand either alone or together on the basis of our innate strength. A good poem of universal human appeal.

Holding on to oneself A wonderful concept. Realize and remain Touched to that sense within. If everyone comes in line in this race... Where is the question of combat zones? ? Dear poet, well said here with good structure of course Hold to self, remove the fighting zones within Good for the mankind, good for the self salvation. Thank you.

I enjoyed this one thanks

great thoughts great write..................hold...

This is another charming and fairly short poem, samanyan, which is very effective at getting it's point across. I liked your chatty style in this interesting write, which helped make it reader friendly right off the bat. Carl.

this is a very soul full piece. I like your thouhgts.

'rather than generating structures or maintaining folds it seems the merit is in developing the internal consistency'

Well penned and I see samanyan we are of the same tram tracks when it comes to thinking of ' What a wonderful world it would be if' ' Thankyou for the read regards uavagood1

life is not simple, but it begins within and if we don't try it's a crying sin. the LORD gave us the power now we have to use the hour. A GREAT WRITE A TEN

This is a basic truth which applies to all philosophy. Your point is a universal one that needs to be repeated and explained the world over. I wish you well. GW62

A wonderful allegory........we need poems like this

a great philosophical write.... I liked it a lot