****hold Your Breath*** Comments

Very good narrative Arijit...and as Margaret says you have talent....10++

You tell a story very well, it is the kind of story that would appear in a newspaper and leaves me with a bitter taste, I prefer such good poetic talent as yours used to spread ideals, not kill them, but I respect your right to focus on anything you feel attracted to.

Likewise Dr. Sheth I too say 'Hold your breath' good write-----

love sucks..........life sucks.........detachment works.........hold your breath........10+++