Friday, January 20, 2006

Hold You In My Smile Comments

Rating: 4.2

Sweet moment, stay with me,
and pray do not flee so soon,
Let me enjoy the bliss of that
first kiss beneath the moon.
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Ernestine Northover
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Leria Hawkins 11 February 2025

I really loved this poem. My browsing paid off! ! A lovely poem indeed!

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* Sunprincess * 23 September 2024

Very nice. Moments are fleeting

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Joan Wagner Wagner 14 September 2024

Beautifully written. So much expressed in so few words. You inspire me.

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John Carter Brown 03 April 2024

A lovely little poem Ernestine.

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Tyler Cobb 28 March 2024

This poem is written wonderfully! With the ability to understand the emotion in every word!

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Tyler Cobb 22 February 2024

I really love all the lines of this it very well expresses the feelings we hold for someone such as when we're young and have/meet that first love that we think is the perfect one! very well written! 👍👍

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Laurie Hill 21 February 2024

A very beautiful and gentle poem, a remembrance.

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Tom Cunningham 03 January 2024

Beautifully romantic Ernrstine

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Faith Brigham 07 February 2023

Such a beautiful and moving love poem.

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Jayne Davies 12 December 2021

Lovely words xx Well done x

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Khairul Ahsan 06 December 2020

So profound! Every reader will remember the memory of their first kiss when s/he reads this poem. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Modern Poem of the Day’!

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 December 2020

Do not depart, Oh please remain within my heart awhile, So that I can savour you once more, and hold you in my smile. /// a heartiest loving poem penned; from the core of heart the love has been expressed; this beautiful smile; this uttered the soft voice, this arm, this beautiful surrounding; this neat and clean all only for the love and living with the peaceful heart; an enjoyable loving poem

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Soul 2 Soul 06 December 2020

Love my soul mate and this poem is for my soulmate, cradling

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Lyn Paul 06 December 2020

A beautiful way to remember that special person and passing the joy on to others with your smile.

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Savita Tyagi 06 December 2020

A sweet moment of life caught beautifully to spreads its bliss. Amazing is power of words.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 December 2020

Holding the sweet moment in a smile " The conceptualization in itself is superb. A well deserved modern poem of the day. Heartiest Congratulations.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2020

Sweet moments of love! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

A poem of happiness. It made me smile

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Belle Wassermeister 06 December 2020

Wonderful work, Ernestine! Congratulations! Modern poem of the day!

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Ejalonibu Abraham 14 September 2020

Hello dear beautiful poet I love this poem, please read and comment on my new poems

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