Hold On To Me Comments

hmmm...that's a poetic assurance!

Trust me I am not flattering you.....but I salute you for your work.......wondrous way you have expressed love

Love is a battle, one you have fought well and will continue to fight. Bravo, another gold medal.

There is a lot of power in a hug and a lot of heart felt emotion in this poem. I can feel the warmth and conviction in a hug so strong that it will never let go. Keep holding on...and keep writing your beautiful poems.

It only takes two to dance

wowwwww a really sweet poem I like that, where you said about parents understanding. You really poured out your heart so sweetly.--very touching I liked it. Makes great read.

I had opposition when I was young. I've never forgotten it.

You poem has lot of relevance now, with Honour Killing a common occurrence now-a-days.

You know this poem is one of your best creation. Vert well crafted poem................. Really very great job.........10+++

It is red and blue..different but true... Rohit you hit me one more time! ..'sorry britney i borrow your line' hahahaha...as usual it is very well written... Sometimes parent can't be agreed with our own decision but hurt them is wrong too... That why this poem is so special, u still in love but at same time respect your parents, that is a good role for any young teen here...: D well done, nice and so original, but how did u can write a poem like this in your birthday? i thought u will bring some other theme...: D

She will do it for u. at least coz u believe it that much. and a true believer is a blessed one! Happy birthday one more time. Wish u together again, best present!

A tender hearted poem. Love the vital key to hold on to! Lovely poem indeed! ; D

keeping those feelings of love under control in our soul. that is the key that i see in this beautiful write of tenderness, love, and delight.

reflecting the present scenario.. when things go against the tide.. our wishes are not fulfilled and though we can fulfill them but we don't wanna hurt our parents.. so its a midway path where we hang.. nicely expressed.. also asking for the lover to always be by ur side through all odds.. but i guess these things in true love are well understood if untold... good write