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Beautiful! ! ! Really love it! ! ! :) [3

A HEART FELT WRITE AND A BEAUTIFUL POEM. WISH YOU A HAPPY NEW YEAR

This is a masterpiece, Siyabongo. Fantastic write. The joy of love, the holding on to our commitment I love every verse of this excellent poem.

Yho! Yho! Am realy lost of words, when you right its as if you intend to amaze..buty ofcause that's the intention of all poets, and above here, is sometjing out of this world, amuseing would be an under-word for a recognition of this poem... Thanks for shaing it bro.... Wow! !

This poem is Truly incredible, every word of every line was simply perfect. Very well written, my friend.

a very touching words

If love is bounded by devotion and commitment then all imperfections will dissolve in the process., Nice theme and your imagery is excellent.

Nobody is perfect; That's n't a problem But the problem is How can we be perfect to all the problems? I like this poem! ! !

hey really great.. i like it very much....

Again you hit the paper with your crashing mind, that was beautiful and pretty well written Siya...I like the way you composed the poem, it's original and the messages was clear! More ink need to be written my friend! _Unwritten Soul

Beautiful and so meaningful. You've touched my heart. (:

yes nobody is perfect! Actually that is truth and fact! but now a days people modified this sentence as ' nobody is perfect, I am the nobody' this is the attitude of modern generation! ! ! ! ! anyway nobody seems to be sincere in this world! your poem is an appeal for the fake identities! ! keep it up! God Bless You! ! !

passionate faith in love... very good poem!

A really lovely poem, really enjoyed, inspirational. Thank you for sharing :)

I love the metampho structure in that poem. Great combination 'Lion jaws in a Dove's mouth'.