Sunday, October 23, 2011

Hold On Comments

Rating: 5.0

They want to see you fall,
Yet you're the one that bleeds
For all the ones that would
Pass you around like a whore.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Dave Walker 24 October 2011

A really good poem as always. A great write.

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Shadow Girl 24 October 2011

whoosh..bullseye! ! ! you hit this one on the head...beautiful, poignant write.

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Jacqui Broad 24 October 2011

What a great poem! Unfortunately, if we hold on too tight, like sand, it'll slip through our fingers...

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Lenore Lee 23 October 2011

Beautiful poem Stephanie, one I can truly relate to. I have seen many people treated in such a manner and it disgusts me.

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