Friday, June 22, 2012

Hold My Hand Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hold my hand, I won't mind
Little effort you have to make
Pull me out of the timid bubble
Little risk I shall then take
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Khushbeen Kaur
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Dr Antony Theodore 11 January 2016

Lets tell each other the things we hid, Lets form a silver line Whisper in my ears all your deepest secrets and I shall tell you mine I threw a clue in the Air, grab and let the silence break My patience is eager to hear from you, hold my hand it says.. This is a wonderful poem. diction, the words, expressions, emotions, thoughts, love, care, desire. all these are here in this poem. sooo much thanks. tony

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Khushbeen Kaur 23 June 2012

Thank you so much :)

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Gaurav Shandilya 22 June 2012

Another exquisite creation by khushbeen. You give voice to words in your poetry.

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Gaurav Shandilya 22 June 2012

Another exquisite creation by khushbeen. You give voice to words in your poetry.

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