Monday, November 14, 2005

Hold Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hold me now,
Hold me fast,
Keep me anchored,
To the ground,
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Holly Heron
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Jon Lloyd 15 November 2005

Beautiful Holly! (We all need a security blamket from time to time, don't we?) Lovely sentiment, simply conveyed. Loved it. Jon.

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***** ********* 15 November 2005

Hello Holly, for a 15 year old you are as old as the hills. Your poem has a universal theme. 10 for saying just what I feel Smiling Tai

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