Hold Me Tender Comments

A beautiful poem on the sadness that sometimes we feel in life.Sometimes we feel lonely and disinterested in life. Very nicely crafted to make it touching. 'So remain before the darkness Touches all this troubled mind Linger in the night's cold shadows All my heartache to unbind'.. is a nice stanza. Loved it.

Very passionate plea for hopeful understanding, wanting to be renewed somehow without going through the intense solitude of loss. Totally squeezed my heart like a sponge filled with painful tears. Awesome poem with a symphony of sadness surrounding it. Great poem, Valerie. Love it. RoseAnn

Hold me tender as I slumber Rescue me from solitude Stay with me until the morning When the day be then renewed An excellent poem declaring the pain of soul which increases more with the torture of loneliness but great like you are those who forebear and share it.Well done. This poem has really taken my heart away. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

as always an elegant piece of poetry

Soul needs to be rescued from solitude. A passionate plea delivered in a beautiful poem.

A lovely poem with beautiful wishes to heal the heart. Very emotional, heart touching one.

A wonderful poem, our memories can see us through the night when we need them the most.

Lovely words indeed sure are tender and for sure the request will be lovingly granted...love is a poem like this a pleasure to read...regards

Your beautiful heart forever healing Valerie. Your memories to be cherished.

A very heartfelt poem.

This is a beautiful poem. It emanates a feeling of tender love. Has to have been written from experience. First class.

A passionate plea.... A touching request.... in all poetic beauty! 'Linger in the night's cold shadows'...... Beautiful line!