Sunday, June 26, 2011

Hold Me Now Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will never rest in piece.
Until this pain will finally cease.
This place is not home.
I feel so alone. (I feel so alone)
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Adam Smitherman
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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