Monday, October 12, 2009

Hold Me Again... Comments

Rating: 3.5

A softly spoken word
Falls off the tip of my tongue
Pressed lips and a gentle kiss
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Ismael Iniguez Carvajal
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Nathan Barkley 14 October 2009

Wow dude very beautiful

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 12 October 2009

Hi Ismael, Welcome to PH! I love this love poem that speaks of 'A softly spoken word fall of the tip of my tongue pressed lips and a gentle kiss; and a warm embrace face to face with the person That I loved'.The narrator must save for a lifetime! . Good job, keep writing. A 10 Thanks for the comment on my poem

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