Saturday, May 7, 2011

Hold Me Comments

Rating: 2.7

Hold me,
when I cry.
Hold me,
when I yell.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Buried Alive 07 May 2011

i think the last line sums up the poem in its entireity

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