Saturday, April 13, 2013

Hold It Last In Heart Comments

Rating: 4.1

Unreachable loves of two
Of highest unreachable sky
Dream to kiss beloved ground
Untold story of two
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 September 2017

It is a best dedicated poem towards your special friend, Saadat Tahir who has lost two beloved family members in March,2012. The deep love among you has been nicely painted though it is mournful. It may be quoted some lines... Life on earth is with you Though my heart buried in the sand As my soul was taken higher above But forever our loves always stay in you, For thou made it alive in every second In your every beating heart, every breath Our loves will live with you And me, I'll bring ours high Bringing to the above Without any harm And it will last.. Thanks for sharing this touching poem.

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Rebecca Navarre 25 June 2017

What A Beautiful Beautiful Poem For Your Friend! ! ! ! ! What A Beautiful Connection....From Sky To Earth, From Earth To Sky! ! ! ! ! This Is Such A Dear Poem And So Very Heart Touching! ! ! ! ! Love The Way It Is Done! ! ! ! ! ! Excellently! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Sentiments! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! So Very Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Added To Favs :) You Are A Blessing! ! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2016

Life on earth is with you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Spiritual Seeker 28 April 2013

My heart feels like stopping reading this beautiful poem....I am reminded again of my parents love, though they had passed away....a true masterpiece Soul. A great 10. Thanks

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 April 2013

Well penned it's a written Soul that you always tried to shawl May peace be upon them thank u

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Danny Draper 25 April 2013

A sustained and descriptive writing of passion and compassion in love and enduring friendship.

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Farah Ilyas 17 April 2013

your poem reflects too much sadnes, you used a great way to show your sympathy for our great poet Sat.. no one can healed his wound, but hope so your poem would make him realize that his loved two always remain with them, may be your poem minimize his cry...lovely tribute

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Poetheart Morgan 15 April 2013

A big heart my friend that shares love for all of us. Like Thomas said, below, you can not hid or denied your talent.

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Frank James Davis 14 April 2013

A brilliant, passionate and quite lovely tribute to your hurting friend. Superior work, soul!

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Paul Brookes 14 April 2013

A beautiful poem Soul such sadness. In the past I too have lost someone who meant a great deal to me but you will always keep them alive in you heart with rememberances of them. Great write BB : O)

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Valerie Dohren 13 April 2013

A beautiful poem Soul, a lovely gift for Saadat - I am sure he will appreciate it. I am so sorry to learn of his tragic loss and my thoughts go out to him.

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